Sunday, March 28, 2010

Chrackk's folktale part 1: Anqie.

            I have ah mark on my leq from my mother not payinq attention twoo me when I was small. I was told that I was an very nosey baby, and playinq with the ironboard one day the hot iron fell on my leg and now my mark or scar is there FOREVER. Anqelia Gentry is her name and an interestinq lady she iss. She uses her voice and mouth allllllllllllllllllllllll dayy.She fusses at me and nehemiah (jordan) allllllllllllllllllllll day. I quess we qive her reasons twoo.??..She's not mean but i can tell you that she would DRIVE you crazy.,.I love anqie but honestly i can't stand her.Me and her is always qettinq into it. The way I see it,....we both have attitudes and smartmouths. We both say how we feel to its full potential. She really makes me mad sometimess.....I qo to school and qet the best qrades ever..and at the end of the day when i qet home from a long day at school...shes either at home and shes calling my phone fussinq.. Shes the type to fuss when i've done wronq but don't say "good job" when i've done good. She qets alonq with jordan so well because he let her run all over him. I personally dont qive ah f.ck.,. She doesn't even know that i smoke WEED. Its not that im afraid twoo tell anqie but i feel this is pay back for qettinq on my nerves sooooooo much....She was never like that untill she lost Jeramey (my deceased brother) after katrina in Atlanta....[thats where we moved at after the storm hit the city. She was sooooooo sweet and lovable before then. Now that incident has really chanqed her persona. So maybe i should understand her then because i've been with her since day one,..But sometimes I think even GOD be like huhhhhhh.?????


one foot out the door she says..

1 comment:

Ms. Barrett said...

I like the beginning of this post. Whenever writers open with an intimate anecdote it makes it personal, and that's what you did. I want to print this out and have you work on making this into prose, because I see a lot of potential in this.

By the way -- probably your feelings on your mother are because she and you are very alike -- perhaps more alike than your mother and your brother. (Also, interesting parallel: Malcolm's family and relationship with his mother and brother. Remember the beginning of the story?")

-Ms. Barrett